if apples were pears
and peaches were plums
and the rose had a different name
if tigers were bears
and fingers were thumbs
i'd love just the same!!!!!
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Very tight, very sweet. Love it!
I am curious though:
Did you not start your sentences with uppercase letters for a reason?
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I'm in total agreement with blakforst. A wonderfully tight and effective piece of poetry. I think it's great.
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this is really cute! i'm loving it! it's simple yet it sums up just what you want to say!
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Really, really good. I'm pretty picky when it comes to poetry and I love this. It makes poetry fun, which it should be.
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Thats a creative one....I like it alot its so simple yet i get the message you are trying to say....
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Nicely put.
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